During brainstorming, one idea usually stands out. What is the most interesting or strongest idea you came up with for your essay, and what made you choose it over the others?

 The idea that most stood out for me in my essay was the 2nd body paragraph. I wrote about Cheryl's drug use and how she used it to mask the pain away. I tried to link it to drug use in general and how people usually get into it to cope with the loss of a love one or a relationship. This hurtful coping mechanism only masks the pain away short term, but long term it just ends up hurting them more. I felt that this idea was my strongest because my topic was how loss impacts identity and out of the many things people usually do during grief is by trying drugs to feel happy during sad times.

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